Monday 9 May 2016

The Tsunami






The Tsunami curled her fingers higher and higher and then slammed her fingers on the city far below laughing as she spread out further and further to take away more innocent lives 

By Charlotte Orme
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 May 2016 at 14:46

    That was really good .it made me think for second is it a real person .it is very descriptive

    From Emily.C

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  2. Anonymous11 May 2016 at 14:45

    I believe this is a incredible poem due to the detail and thrill . From Che.B

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  3. Anonymous11 May 2016 at 14:47

    I feel like I'm up there with her well done.

    FROM RILEY.S

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  4. Anonymous11 May 2016 at 17:37

    Nice work Charlotte. I fell like i am there.

    from kiilani

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