Wednesday 25 May 2016

The mysterious treasure chest-By Jack.S

Once there was a treasure chest that had the most mysterious thing in it. People were looking everywhere but one-day a boy called Daniel found a map and this is were the story begins. Daniel is a boy who like to exercise ."Ahh" screamed Daniel as the weight got too heavy that he fell thorough the hole that the weight lift made.He found a map to some sort of treasure chest."I can be rich and famous now"thought Daniel.He was at some sort of island with his friend Jamie."Ahh"screamed Jamie after he got trapped.Daniel found a cave that had a little bit of light in it.As he went further he found the chest.He opened it.It was a computer."I came here for nothing"Said Daniel.He brought the computer home.He opened it up and played extreme hide and seek.Suddenly Daniel got sucked into the game and lived in there forever. 

2 comments:

  1. Intresting story jack

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  2. Nice story I liked it when Daniel fell through the hole

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