Once there was a treasure chest that had the most mysterious thing in it. People were looking everywhere but one-day a boy called Daniel found a map and this is were the story begins. Daniel is a boy who like to exercise ."Ahh" screamed Daniel as the weight got too heavy that he fell thorough the hole that the weight lift made.He found a map to some sort of treasure chest."I can be rich and famous now"thought Daniel.He was at some sort of island with his friend Jamie."Ahh"screamed Jamie after he got trapped.Daniel found a cave that had a little bit of light in it.As he went further he found the chest.He opened it.It was a computer."I came here for nothing"Said Daniel.He brought the computer home.He opened it up and played extreme hide and seek.Suddenly Daniel got sucked into the game and lived in there forever.
Intresting story jack
ReplyDeleteNice story I liked it when Daniel fell through the hole
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