Monday, 16 May 2016

Gold

Gold

Gold is the smell of Glory and victory.
Gold looks like a shiny ripped chocolate bar rapper.
Gold is a feeling of winning a world victory.
Gold sounds like a brick smashed to the ground.
Gold is the taste of caramel running down your throat.
Gold is me

 By Aiden

6 comments:

  1. Great Aiden I its a good poem

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  2. Really descriptive writing Aiden its a very good poem good job. Ishan








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  3. Awsome detail Aiden its cool I like it

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  4. awesome cool i love it
    from cj

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  5. super Aiden Its a outstanding poem

    by Oliver

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