Stomp, stomp, thump, thump my heart reached out into my stomach and grabbed me. My nana's dog barked and screamed at this terrifying bear. Barney my nana's dog pounces at it but his innocent little body gets brutally devoured by the bear. I scream, "It's either now or never." I tell myself forget about the poor dog barking for me. I have to save myself but I just couldn't forget about him I grabbed the remains of the dog and ran as fast as I could as his blood bursting all over me. I felt like the trees were teasing me as the wind whistled with laughter. I finally got home but its too late. He was gone. I thought that the good guys always win. I guess not!
By Hannah Russell
great job nice onomatopoeia hannah
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ReplyDeleteAwesome cool gruesome from CJ and zach
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ReplyDeletethanks Oliver and jackson
ReplyDeleteHannah Russell
Great job Hannah. It hooked me in. By Jaxon
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ReplyDeleteThat sounds very real and sad Hannah good job
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see all the different skills you have been learning coming through in your writing. Miss Slater
ReplyDeleteAmazing story Hannah It hooked me in when I started reading
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Ha ha good description ⚡️🕶
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