I could slowly feel the nerves creeping up into my body as my name was called. I nervously and anxiously walked up to my lane ready to dive. The blood was rushing through my cold body and my heart was pounding like a elephant stomping ferociously. I put my arms up ready to leap. As they were up, my body started going num. As Mr Parsons was slowly saying "ready set" as I glanced in his shimmering eyes he said "GO!!!!!!!!!".
By Hannah Russell
A great descriptive piece of writing Hannah - I can feel your nervousness through the words!
ReplyDeleteyou make it feel like I'm actually there Hannah good job by Riley Shields
ReplyDeleteAmazing writing Hannah it feels like I`m doing it again great job
ReplyDeletegreat job Hannah keep doing what your doing
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ReplyDeleteThank you Hannah for your writing. Thank you families for coming to support us. Rhianna
ReplyDeletegreat choose of language Hannah.By Annabelle
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