By Hannah R
Thursday 31 March 2016
CAMP!
As my harness was being clipped on bad thoughts started to rush into my mind. I was nervous. I was terrified. I started to sweat. I was clipped on perfectly. I was safe but bad thoughts were still running through my pounding brain. Now, just walk down the steps. I closed my eyes (I know I shouldn't close my eyes while walking down steps) step by step. I open my eyes to reach for the last step, but my harness was too tight and the next thing I knew was I was soring through the thin air over the river and trees. WOW! What an experience.I swung back off the tyres and swiftly landed.
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ReplyDeleteamazing it was really dicscriptive post Hannah By Riley Shields
ReplyDeletenice writing Hannah. It was an amazing experience for me to. from Leo M.
ReplyDeleteWow nice writing Hannah what a fun experince
ReplyDeletenice Hannah tells me how nervous you were from vincent
ReplyDeleteamazing writing Hannah you had fun experince at camp from josiah
ReplyDeleteIt looks very very scary.By Annabelle
ReplyDeletegreat writing Hannah it sounds like you had a good experince on the flying fox
ReplyDeleteAiden
great writing hannah it sounds like you really felt scared,really descriptive felt like i was there
ReplyDeleteby cj
Great writing Hannah it's really dicscrptive and I could feel that u were scared through your story
ReplyDeleteBy Savannah
Great work Hannah
ReplyDeleteIsaac.S
Great work Hannah that was really descriptive
ReplyDeleteNice work Hannah it was really descriptive and your story was so good.I felt like I was there and we all know that that was just plain old amazing!Hope you had a really good time.
ReplyDeleteSophie
I'm so jealous! Hope you all had lots of fun😉
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